Example 2: Honestly speaking, I don’t like my university because the schoolyard is too small and it’s not very beautiful. Moreover, the conditions of our dormitory (宿舍) can’t satisfy our need. Actually it’s not as good as that of my high school. As it’s impossible to change the realities, I’ve tried my best to adapt myself to the new life. Besides study, I also find something to enrich my life（丰富我的生活）. Last semester, I joined the Students’ Union（学生会）, and we organized several extracurricular activities（课外活动）, which had made my school life more colourful and challenging（有挑战性的）.

Brief Comment（简评）：Example 2很巧妙地从对校园生活的不满过渡到自己良好的适应能力上，Honestly speaking和Actually在囗语中的自然使用增加了交流的真实可信，Moreover有效地划分了层次，最后非限制性定语从句的使用为表达增色不少。

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