Example 2: To be honest, life in the university is not as comfortable as I expected. Firstly, we are heavily burdened with(超负荷的)many classes, excessive homework and examinations, which keeps us working hard from morning till night. Secondly, the traditional teaching method is too dull. We are fed like ducks or rather containers listening to the teachers all the time in class, being busy taking notes(记笔记). Our brains become numb(麻木的)because of the mechanical acceptance of knowledge. And such days repeat day after day, week after week, and year after yea. It is simply tiresome(令人厌倦的). And the food in the university canteen(餐厅) can seldom be tasty(美味的)enough. Whenever dinner time comes I can’t help thinking of the food made by my mother. Finally, the living condition here is much worse than that of my home. I have to share a dorm with at least other four roommates. It is usually crowded with our personal belongs(个人物品). Nobody has his own privacy(个人隐私)living in such a dorm. In brief, I don’t think life in university is wonderful.
Brief Comment(简评):抱怨的高手是善于博取对方的认同甚至是同情。To be honest, Frankly speaking, To tell the truth是表达不同意见的常用短语,阐明立场后,Example 2从学习内容、学习方式、饮食和住宿四个方面(Firstly...Scondly...And...Finally...)有力支持了自己的论点,最后用In brief再次呼应开头的立论,回答完整清晰。
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