Example 3: I am totally in favor of studying abroad. Firstly, there is no better opportunity to improve my second-language than to live in the country in which it is spoken. Secondly, there is no doubt that（毫无疑问）students could equip themselves with diversities of knowledge and skills, especially modern technology different from our own country, thus greatly broadening our horizons（拓展视野）. Last but not least, students could not only become more independent through living abroad, but also be better at communication through getting along with others, which contributes to improving the social skills of the students.

Brief Comment（简评）：三位答题者逻辑清晰，表达准确，形式上都运用了Firstly, Secondly等关联词层层推进自己的见解，在内容上重点分析了海外深造对知识面拓展和自身素质提高的有利因素，对于不利因素的简要陈述甚至撒开不谈反映出学生对出国深造已经做好了充分的思想准备，非常希望通过这种方式使自身竞争力获得进一步提高。

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