Example 2: I’ve always had a dream of becoming a teacher. A doctor is allowed to usher（带来）life into the world in one magic moment. An architect knows that if he builds with care his structure may stand for centuries. A teacher is allowed to see that life is reborn each day with new questions, ideas and instructions, and he knows that if he builds with love and truth, what he builds will last forever. In my opinion, even if the names and faces have been forgotten but teachers’ lessons and instructions will always be remembered by their Examples forever. Maybe several years later I’ll stand in the front of a classroom giving lectures to my Examples. However, before that, I have to explore more effective teaching methods and I’m now looking forward to a revolution in the field of education which is launched（发动，开展）by myself.

Brief Comment (简评)：开始的几个排比句列举了几种不同职业的特点，虽然用得很有气势，但过于书面化，显得有些不自然。后面In my opinion话锋一转，把回答切换到现实中来。回答问题的时候应注意引经据典是可以的，但大而空谈的罗列则可能会事倍功半。

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