Example 2: l think I will find a good job in the future so that high salary, wonderful cars and big houses are not far away. Because I enjoy acquiring（获得）new skills and information, which helps me adapt to the fast-changing world as well as pursue my interests. In addition, a job with open prospects would give me constant incentive to improve myself and gain more knowledge. Moreover, some social practice experience will broaden my abilities and improve my interpersonal（人际关系）skills, which are crucial to（至关重要的）any business endeavor（努力）. Above all, 1 will try to improve myself and make myself the most capable one.

Brief Comment (简评)：Example 2回答得很实在：“高薪、名车、豪宅一我来了！我自信，因为我有能力！”In addition和Moreover两个补充性的连接词用得不错，有类似用法的还有Furthermore, Besides等。

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