Example 2: My major is Journalism(新闻专业). The current job situation for us is serious. First, the quantity of Journalism majors is saturated(饱和的), and many Examples are choosing this major. Second, with the development of technology, everyone may become a journalist in some other conditions. For example, a person can take some photos or videos about something with a mobile phone, and at this moment he may be a journalist. Last but not least, graduates of Journalism don’t gain enough professional knowledge in university. When comes across a report of certain professional field, they’ll meet an obstacle（障碍）. Under this serious situation, we Journalism majors must attempt to（努力）extend our horizons of thinking（思路，眼界） and be all around（全面的）persons. Thus, we could face the challenges of the future and be competent of（胜任的）a job in this field.

Brief Comment (简评)：语言流畅，层次分明，是一篇不错的范例。Example 2结合自己的专业学习经历进行阐述，显得生动而又可信。

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