Example 2: Everyone wants to succeed. But what are the essential conditions of success? Firstly, you must have genius. Genius shows that one may have gift in certain field. For example, if a person doesn’t have the gift in painting, he can hardly succeed in painting. Secondly, it’s curiosity. People must have it so that they can find some strange things and create new things. The third one is confidence. Having confidence, you’11 believe in yourself so that you have the passion to develop. The last one is determination. When you explore success, you may meet with failure. Don’t give up and you will finally succeed.
Brief Comment (简评):这篇例文的结构与上一篇基本一样。只是我们又看到了不同的成功要素—天才、好奇心、信心与决心。一并列举出来,希望能抛砖引玉。
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