Example 4: One month ago when I saw a poster saying, “Let’s make friends with strangers” I hesitated(犹豫). I really hoped to know more people, but. . . I was somewhat shy and had no confidence. However, I signed up at last.

On that Sunday, the special activity was held. We gathered on the playground and were grouped in a way that we didn’t know each other in our group. After a small opening ceremony we began to participate in a series of(一系列的)team games. During that short three hours, we had fun and came to know each other at the same time. At the end of the activity, we wrote down our feelings towards each other. I couldn’t wait to read the words they’d left on my paper. What a joy! They really gave me encouragement.

Well, I think the experience I gained the very day was such a success that to some degree. I understood what social communication was and I got to know more about myself and most importantly, I raised my confidence in dealing with social relationship more or less.

Brief Comment (简评):两位应答者与我们分享了他们各自的一次成功体验。Example 3利用假期做兼职,成功的卖掉了第一部手机,叙述详实Example 4描述了一次新奇的交友活动,题材新颖。不同的经历,相同的目的和作用,两位应答者都通过各自的小小成功,积攒了经验,迈出了踏入社会的宝贵的第一步。




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