Example 2: In my opinion, winning means winning over oneself. It does not necessarily mean being the best in a certain field. It means being the best one can be and better than one used to be. The process, rather the result, is important.

Timidity(胆怯) and laziness are people’s greatest enemies. If one can overcome these weaknesses, he is a winner in life. People who have tried their best and made the greatest achievements in their careers can be considered winners.

There is only one champion in a race or a contest, but there can be more than one winner. Take some Olympic athletes for example. They may not win medals, but if they break their own records, they are winners.

Zhang Haidi is another good case in point(相关的). Not only had she overcome her own disease but also she had taken advantage of her knowledge in medicine to help others overcome their diseases. This kind of person can be called “a winner in life”. They can never be defeated(打败) by difficulties in life,and always try to find the beautiful aspects of life. A winner in life doesn’t need to be a giant(巨人). What he or she needs is confidence in life. Those people who find life full of troublesome(麻烦的)trifles(琐事)will always be “losers in life”.

Brief Comment (简评)生活的赢者不一定都是富有的企业家或是领袖人物。只要你热爱生活,对自己、对未来充满自信,勇于战胜自己,一样可以顽强、乐观、充满自信地面对生活。回答中列举了张海迪和奥运会运动员努力拼搏、战胜自我的例子,引用贴切,画龙点睛。




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