Example 2: Just a few years ago, I was suddenly fond of economy and began to watch the economic programs on CCTV-2 for half an hour everyday regardless of my bad eyesight. With learning more and more economic phenomena and theories, I was determined to be a good economist for my homeland.

I have doubted that if this plan was just an impulsive(冲动的) idea. But after some deep thought, I strengthen(增强) my determination because I like it. I love my country and I think maybe I have the ability to contribute to it.

In the past, beneath the surface of China’s fast-developing economy,some causality(因果关系) was brewing(酝酿) dangerously with few people’s notice. Now, under the influence of the global economic crisis, this causality exploded and

alarming decline(<经济>衰退) has taken place in some areas of national products. Now our country is lack of a batch of(一批) young, modest and patriotic economists. And to me, as the saying goes, “Interest is the best teacher”, I think,my interest in economy and the talent will certainly help.

With the goal in my heart, I will study hard and I am sure I will make great contributions to my motherland and all the Chinese.

Brief Comment (简评)金融危机加剧了国际经济环境的衰退,中国的经济也不免受到影响。面对停滞甚至是衰退的经济大环境。Example 2的回答充满自信,第一段首先开门见山:我要做一名经济学家,为祖国和人民尽匹夫之责!叙述流畅,理据充足。




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