Example 2: I like the advertisements that tell us the truth, because only when the products live up to the benefits as the advertisements promise do I regard them as good ones.
I have two reasons for my point. Firstly, advertisements should provide us with useful information which is not deceptive(欺骗性的)so that customers can use their products safely. Secondly, customers are inclined to(倾向于,易于)buy the products that have good brands and high quality. Advertisers usually advertise for the brands and quality of their products. I will feel good when the products live up to the promised benefits and I would like to see the advertisements next time, because I can benefit from them. If I was cheated by the advertisements, I would think they are offensive(无礼的,冒犯的)and I would not buy their products. I don’t want to be the victim(受害者).
In my opinion, good advertisements are always the honest ones, which I like best.
Brief Comment(简评):Example 2并没有明确指明自己喜欢哪一种广告,而是非常坦诚,直言自己喜欢那些“真实的不说谎的”广告,立意可谓别出心裁。然后分别从广告本身和消费者两方面论述,目的都是为了说明我们需要的是符合产品本身事实的广告。感觉Example 2性格非常率真爽直,直言自己如果受到了欺骗,会感觉受到了冒犯,高呼自己不愿成为受害者,从侧面揭示了虚假广告给大众带来的负面影响。
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