Example 2: With the rapid development of the society,online shopping is becoming increasingly popular among the general public.
When I first got to know online shopping, I was attracted immediately. There are great varieties of goods online so that we have many choices. I often visit websites such as dangdang. com and taobao. com. The articles online are usually cheaper than those offered in markets, which I think is the most important advantage. I once bought necklaces, books, and babaka(背背佳)via the Internet. Some websites of online shopping are reliable. Therefore, it’s unnecessary to worry about the delivery(递送,交付)of the items we have purchased. For example, we can refuse to accept the products if they are of poor quality.
However, online shopping also has disadvantages. Since you cannot touch the wares(商品<常指不在商店中的>), it’s hard to judge their quality. Besides, the color end luster(色泽)of things we see online is much better than those in reality. Hence we are likely to be misled by their false appearances. In addition, there are many beautiful clothes online, but I have never bought one since I cannot try it on. I am afraid that it won’t fit me well. From time to time, cheating occurs so we must watch out when we shop online.
In a word, we should take objective attitude towards online shopping.
Brief Comment(简评):从回答可以看出,有无网络购物的经历对网络购物的体会是不同的:没有网络购物经历的Example 1主要是从宏观感觉的可靠性与否来论其优劣;而有网络购物经历的Example 2则更多地谈了从微观细节方面诸如购物环节、货物颜色等网络购物与现场购物体会的差异来论其优劣。两个回答都能通过举例的方法,来说明自己的观点,对于这个略显抽象的问题解答不无裨益。
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