Example 3: If affordable（（时间、金钱等）可负担得起）, most people would love to travel and appreciate the beautiful scenery around the world, I guess. Well-planned traveling can offer you a chance to make new friends and broaden your horizon to an extent which can not be reached previously, aside from relaxing yourself both physically and psychologically. Thanks to（多亏）the fresh feeling gained from traveling, people are expected to perform better in their study and work.

However, what about the troubles people leave behind（剩下，留下）? Plastic bags are found every where, and animals seem upset（不安的，烦躁的） about the visitors’ rude behavior which makes their life a total mess（乱七八糟）. In fact, when holidays draw near, it is no wonder that（不足为奇）roads and places of interest are full of vehicles and crowded travelers. I really cannot agree with the way people are traveling today, which has caused so many problems such as traffic jam and pollution. Obviously, this should be the last choice of a citizen with enough awareness of social responsibility.

So why not try to be a green-traveler（环保旅行者）? Just concern a little more about the environment and other things, for example, traveling by bike or bus, and you may experience a completely different journey. People can gain more comfort from altruistic（利他的） actions, and I think this can be applied to travel as well—care more, and you’ll enjoy more.

Brief Comment（简评）：表达有一定的新意和深度，对爱好旅游的原因简单掠过，重点从另一侧面揭 示出目前人们旅游过程中给自然和生态带来的破坏，使读者有耳目一新的感觉，最后得出自己的观点，倡导大家做一个green-traveler显然这是一个不错的创意，无论对大自然还是对旅行者来说，都是一个双赢的选择，相信在今后的旅游中，大家会认真考虑Example 3的这个提议。

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