Example 2: In my opinion, one’s hobbies can tell a great deal about what kind of personality he has. A person’s character can be various: optimistic or pessimistic, outgoing or introverted（内向的）, easygoing or eccentric（古怪的）. And it is our personality that plays an important role in the sort of things we are more likely to do when faced with similar choices. For example, when having a day off, an outgoing person would like to call on his friends to go out together. On the contrary, an unsociable（不好交际的，孤僻的）man would prefer to stay alone. Hence, there is no denying that our personality determines our hobbies to a large extent, and so we can know others’ personality simply from their hobbies.
What’s more, not only can hobbies reflect our personality, but also hobbies can shape our personality, Just as what a celebrity（名人）has said before, we can remedy the deficiencies（缺点）in our personality by means of developing certain hobbies. For instance, playing ball games will be a really good way to convert an eccentric individual into（把.....转变成）an easygoing one for this sport calls for, in particular（尤其）, wonderful teamwork that can help one get compatible（相容的） with others. So keeping a close eye on the relationship between hobbies and personality. we’ll benefit a lot.
Brief Comment（简评）：关于性格和爱好之间的关系可以说是见仁见智。本题中Example 2首先将性格进行分类，通过对同种事物不同性格人的不同反馈进行分析，得出了“性格在很大 程度上决定了兴趣爱好”的结论。值得肯定的是，Example 2并未就此浅尝辄止，继而从问题另一方面即“兴趣爱好可以塑造人的性格”展开论述，使回答显得更充实，观点更具说服力。There is no denying that. . . , It is an undeniable + act that”类似的套用句型在口语作文中反复使用。
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