Example 2: It was the holiday of the National Day in 2018 when Dad drove Mum and I to Mount Pan in Tianjin. As it was the first holiday since I entered the high school where I lived apart from my parents for a whole month, it was expected to be exciting and wonderful, and indeed, it was. Though I’ve traveled many places with my parents since I was a little girl, that trip was the warmest, most wonderful and relaxing one because we felt free to talk about anything we like. We climbed the mountain the next morning, and actually it was not so beautiful as we could expect of one with trees, flowers, a great peak or other amazing things, but it became the greatest trip for all of us. At that time, I shared with them my feelings and thoughts of new life in the high school, and they treated me as an adult. That trip was more than a holiday, for it was a time when I felt being deeply loved; it was a time when I felt I was living In a great family full of love, warmth and happiness. All of us cherish that fantastic trip in our hearts.

Brief Comment（简评）：或许这是一个女孩走向独立生活的第一次旅行，言语间流露出Example 2 对这次旅行深刻而又美好的回忆。高中之前，被认为是孩子，而进入高中之后家长给予其更多的独立生活空间和平等表达的机会，这一切都使Example 2感受到了成长的喜悦，正是这种喜悦给Example 2最深刻的印象。的确，旅行会给人带来许多不同的感受，而选取成长为主题感受旅行很有新意，最后通过对爱的理解烘托了主题的表达。

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