Example 3: Fashion, nowadays, is everywhere, and nobody can get rid of it. Clothing can be such an important part of fashion. To some extent, clothing leads the fashion trend, having a strong influence on other fields. Here it goes like this way: as is known to all, fashion is a concept, a feeling or a certain culture. Fashion leaders come up with fantastic ideas(奇思妙想)in an appropriate time. And then, clothing designers start a series of making new dresses, which means that fashion show(时装表演)is on the way. Once the new design is widely appreciated, both the design style and concept will spread every single corner of the world just as a serious flu. Maybe that’s the tragic power(悲剧的感染力)of fashion. Next day, when waking up in the morning, you may probably find out everybody just in the same style. Wow, you would like to scream at the top of your lungs. As a result, you feel an irresistible impulse to rush into a fashion shop(时装店). I guess people are addicted to clothing of fashion by the light of nature. Fashion supports the development of clothing industry, while clothing reflects what fashion is.
Because fashions in dressing are changing constantly, different styles, different colors and different materials keep emerging at various periods. Usually we will change our taste to adapt to the new things. When I was a little boy, I didn’t care about clothes at all. I only wanted them to be durable(耐用的,持久的). But after I entered the middle school I started to pay attention to what I wear. I wanted to be fashionable. As a college Example, I concern more about the style of clothing. I don’t want to be a little boy any more. As the saying goes, beauty is in everybody’s heart. In my way of thinking, when I dress better, I will feel more comfortable and relaxed. I believe that I have shown a good image before others, thus feeling very confident. One’s mood is affected by the circumstance around him, and also by the dresses. Beautiful clothing can make one in a good mood. If the clothes I wear suit me well, I’ll feel comfortable. This is just like the weather, we tend to feel better in the good weather. Just show your awesome dress, and be the highlight(最精彩的部分)of fashion.
Brief Comment(简评):Example 3思路清晰,开门见山,从一开始就点出时尚已成为现代人生活的一部分。之后通过be such an important part of巧妙地过渡到对服饰的论述。两者关系的阐释可谓客观又不乏生动,其中比喻 (a serious flu) 和假想 (may probably find out) 的使用为答题增添了色彩,to some extent, as is known to all, as a result等短语体现了Example 3的组织逻辑性,令人信服。结尾言简意赅,点明主题,服装是和心情搭配的,且以号召式的祈使句收尾更有回味无穷的效果。
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