Example 2: Nowadays, with the development of society, economy and science, people’s living standard has witnessed(目击,见证) great improvement. High technology products such as computers, automobiles and some other appliances(工具,器械)are being used in our daily life. And we have come to the point that we cannot survive without them. The Inter­net has brought changes into our lives. Even though I have not got a computer of my own yet, I surf the Internet every day in the library. I find that I have been addicted to this great communicative tool. Firstly, I will scan the daily national or international news. Secondly, I would log onto my e-mail box to receive and send mails. E-mail has become one of the most important tools for me to contact with my friends and classmates. Thirdly, I will enjoy some funny videos over the Net or download fantastic music into my MP3. At weekends, if time permits, I may play PC games with my classmates. Thanks to the Internet, we can have a more colorful life. I enjoy the benefits Internet has brought to me.

The Internet, just like the cell phones and televisions, has become a need in this modern era. In fact, the cyberspace(网络空间)fever is still spreading, faster than we ever imagined. One needs only a telephone line and a computer equipped with a modem to explore cyberspace. Thus knowledge is now easily and readily accessible. With just a simple surf to various search engines(搜索引擎)in the Net like Yahoo or AltaVista , we can get thousands of web addresses linked to the information we want. We can even -download it and save it into our computer for free. Furthermore, communication via the Internet is very convenient and cheap. Net communities can congregate(聚集)via e-groups or chat rooms at a very low cost. Discussions can be held online without the hassle(麻烦,困难)of rushing to a meeting place. We can even contact our friends or relatives anywhere in the world easily by sending e-mails, which is much cheaper than the conventional(传统的)“Snail Mail. Indeed, the Internet boom has made the world even smaller, and it’ll surely be used more extensively in the future.

Brief Comment(简评):毫无疑问,Example 2给出了肯定的答复。指出在这个无“网”不在的时代,网络带给人许多便利,并结合自身实际予以论证。语言流畅,用词准确。




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