Example 2:Oil, petrochemicals, textiles, building materials and electric power are the pillar industries in my hometown. Besides, Xinjiang is an area rich in mineral deposits(沉积物,藏储物), where reserves abundant mineral resources. It is reported that the findings are more than 130 kinds of mineral deposits.
My hometown is China’s largest growing base of cotton and lavender’s planting areas. These two crops account for 90% of the nation’s total. Furthermore with the second largest pastureland(牧场), Xinjiang is one of the major sheep farming areas and is the fine-wool production base in China. Moreover, the fruits like Yilin apple, Karla pear, seedless(无籽的)white grape and Hami melon all have a well-known reputation worldwide.
Brief Comment(简评):Example 1的回答简洁流利;Example 2主题鲜明,条理清晰,并且把当地 产业发展与地域特色巧妙联系起来。
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