Example 2:I used to live in the countryside. The kindness and passion of people in my hometown impressed me a lot. Usually if one family has funeral(葬礼,出殡)or wedding matters, neighbors will actually give a hand.
Brief Comment:Example 1回答层次清晰,首句开篇点题,指出人的性格由当地文化和环境决定,起到了很好的铺陈和导入作用;Example 2的回答中心明确,但过于简短,让人感觉意犹未尽。
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