Example 3: As we all know, one cannot live without others. And the family is the most important relatives around us. Although we are living in a modern society in which everything is convenient and accessible, it is important to have family reunions frequently.
Firstly, our parents could feel lonely as they are growing older, and they are often looking forward to warmth, happiness and friendliness. As children, we should not only take the burden of their living, but also take care of their mind. And having family reunions can make them happy and fulfill our responsibility.
Secondly, our kids are so young that they have not developed sound personalities while having not right concept about the world. So they need the lead of adults. If parents are busy working and pay no attention to their children, some problems could emerge(出现)and would do harm to their growth. Having family reunions can enhance the communication between parents and children. Children can enjoy more love and affection(感情)from their parents.
Finally, having family reunions could let family members enjoy the warmth of the family. They can love the life and appreciate it. Except that, family holidays can relieve(减轻)them from their busy work and improve their health conditions.
In a world, having family reunions is beneficial to the establishment of the harmonious family.
Brief Comment:条理清晰,“总分总”式的典型论证结构令观点明确。分别以家长(老人)和孩子的视点去分析家庭聚会的好处,角度独特而新颖。
新形态2021