Example 3：At present, it is universal that couples live together without marriage registration. And most people think that is understandable. But I insist that it has a series of defects（缺憾） if couples live together without marriage registration.

Firstly, if couples live together without marriage registration, most women would choose abortion when they are pregnant. But abortion would do harm to the women physically（身体上地）and psychologically（心理上地）.

Secondly, if a woman is pregnant and then gives birth to a baby, the child wouldn’t get better education in the future.

Thirdly living together without marriage registration comes into conflict with（与…冲突）our traditional moral values（道德观）.

Brief Comment: Example 3对未婚同居这一现象持反对态度。认为未婚同居易给女性造成伤害，不利于孩子的成长教育并有违社会传统观念。虽然条理清楚，但略显单薄，给人一种虎头蛇尾的感觉。最后一点让人意犹未尽，如果能继续阐述一下会更好。

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