Example 3: When I was a child, I thought romance only belonged to the rich and it meant having a luxurious dinner in a splendid restaurant. But at the age of first dawning of love(情窦初开), my previous idea has changed now. I believe that romance doesn’t depend on fortune(财富)and won’t fade with time passing by in case that we love each other and take attentive care of love between us. What really counts is the endeavor between a couple. And what contributes to change my idea is my own experience. My grandpa is romantic. When grandma was in hospital, he looked after her carefully at daytime and made the cross-stitch(十字绣)bearing the best wishes for her health at night. My father is romantic. Knowing well that mom is fond of flowers, my 46-year-old dad buys a big bunch of roses as a present in every Valentine’s Day. And my boyfriend convinces me that as long as we want we'll find and create more sweet memories together even in an ordinary and busy life. In closing, think that the pursuit of romance plays an important role in increasing the feeling of satisfaction and happiness in life.

Brief Comment不难看出Example 3是一位具有浪漫主义色彩的女孩,叙述中自然而然地流露出了对感情的珍重,但却忽略了对问题后半部分的回答,这也是其不足之处。




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