Example 4: As we all know,animals are our friends. We human beings would feel lonely without them. The earth doesn't only belong to us, but also to the animals and the plants. I have ever had four pets, three dogs and one cat. I like them very much, but the cat and two of the dogs were lost, I feel very sad for not taking good care of them.

First, we should be kind to animals, and let them have their own space. What’s more, we should treat the animals properly .avoiding linking them only to drugs, fur or meat. In addition, the government should make laws to protect wild animals. For endangered species, we should set up nature reserves. We should be strongly discouraged from killing the wild animals. Second, we should protect the environment so as to make the sky blue, the grass green, thus creating a comfortable space for the animals to live. Ifs not only for the animals but also for us. Last but not least, we should tell more and more people why and how to protect the animals, and surely everyone has his part.

Example 5: There are thousands of extinct species to date. Once they are gone, they will never come back. Therefore, it is important that we protect animals. All animals play important parts in the food chains as well as in assisting other living beings. The question of how to protect animals has been concerned by many people.

To begin with, forests are the important resources that we should be concerned about. Forests are the main habitat for animals. Actually, most of the extinction of the animals is caused by the destruction to their habitat.

In addition, environmental preservation also helps protect animals. Lots of fish died as a result of the water pollution, and considerable numbers of birds were killed by the air pollution. We should reduce the discharge(排放)of the effluent(废液,污水等)and the waste gases.

Last but not least, hunt and illegal trade of endangered animals should be prohibited. Government should issue some related laws to protect animals and supervise people to abide by the law.

Human beings should take animal protection seriously and try to ensure the sustainable development in the long run.

Brief Comment:五位答题者分别提出了保护动物的具体措施,从结构上几乎都运用了总一分—总的模式,思路清晰。第一、四、五位答题者开门见山指明加强动物保护的必要性,随后纲举目张,分别提出若干切实可行的建议,且较好地运用了关联词语;第二、三位在回答题目时则采取了自问自答的形式(So what should we do? /.... should we just sit back doing nothing?),语气坚定,突出了各自的观点。




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