Example 2: Nowadays, more and more electronic products based on new technology have become important parts of our lives. People can make one’s life more happy and convenient by using these things. Five years ago, the MP3 player was not a common thing in the daily time. But now, almost every youth has a more useful player than MP3, which is usually called MP4 player or even MP5 player.

I got an MP4 player last year. Most MP3 players can only be used for “listening” but MP4 player can also be used for “watching”. So it has a screen on the front page with five buttons: volume up（增大音量）and down, next one, last one and the menu button. There is a speaker on its back so you can hear the voice of the file without the headphones（耳机）. It can save files for 2G bytes（字节）. When I want to watch a film on it, I just need to put the film file into its saver（节省）by computer. Then I can watch the film whenever I like. The MP4 player brings much convenience to people. Portable（便携式的）as it is, people can listen to music on the way anywhere. During a boring journey, people can watch a funny show or a film to kill time. It can even be used to read an electronic novel. It can be taken to everywhere in a pocket and children can hold it easily. The things you should care about are just the dump energy and your unhealthy eyes.

Human beings always need a convenient life. Maybe someday in the future, we can find a better player than MP4. But now, why don't we think MP4 player is a wonderful thing? How nice it is!

Brief Comment: Example 1描述的是自己的一款华为手机，是去大学念书前父亲送给自己的。它外观炫丽，功能较多，且便于携带，作者非常喜欢。考生用词准确丰富，娓娓道来，可见英语功底牢固。美中不足的是没有描述这一型号手机近几年的发展；Example 2描述的是MP4，用了一些比较专业的词汇，如volume, file, byte, saver等等。缺点也是没有明确陈述其发展，只是点明它是由MP3发展而来的。

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