Example 2: My hometown has changed a lot. People’s living conditions have improved a lot in recent years. Houses are surrounded(环绕)by trees and the air is much fresher than be[...]
Example 2:Oil, petrochemicals, textiles, building materials and electric power are the pillar industries in my hometown. Besides, Xinjiang is an area rich in mineral deposits([...]
Brief Comment(简评):三个回答都有可取之处,但论证方法各异。在第一个回答中,不少中国人现在过洋节曰子记得很准,但具有同样意义的本国节日却慢慢被淡忘。Example 1就选取了这样一个角度表达了审慎的担忧。在内容上,从face到learn from继而protect,层层递进提出了自己的看法;从措辞上选择了 be in perfect [...]
Brief Comment(简评):本题的解答视角新颖,观察独特。Example 4并没有简单评论西方节日受到欢迎的是与非,而是引入社会上不同的观点,并结合自己的感受和体会对这些观点进行分析,在解读圣诞节和感恩节的不同心理需求中得出结论。此外, I don't protest against, However, as for me等句式的巧[...]