Example 2:There are many taboos whether in Chinese culture or in foreign culture. Here, I would like to share some with you. Chinese don’t like to choose white or black gift f[...]
Example 2: With the fast development of China’s economy, a lot of Chinese famous brands grow fast, and some even have bravely walk out and actively expand to foreign markets. [...]
Example 3:When it comes to modern technology, I believe, we’d better discuss this question from two sides. Since we all agree that the modern technology is always a two — edge[...]
Brief Comment: Example 1重点针对私家车的问题展开分析,例如可以仿效一些城市根据其车牌号的不同对其出行进行规定。但是,这并不能从根本上解决问题,因为有钱人可以再花钱买辆车换个车牌号。最后指出,交通问题的解决没有很好的方法,全靠公民的自觉性。我们如果能坚持坐公交车或步行上班,交通问题就会缓解。Example 2的层次比较清晰,重[...]
Brief Comment: Example 1首先点明了教育对整个国家发展的举足轻重的作用。接着在第三段指出了自己认为教育改革应该从以下几方面进行,如:学校教育不应该仅仅教给学生知识,更应该教给他们学习的方法。老师应该注重培养学生的思维能力。最后,考生指出,团队精神也是学校教育培养的重点;Example 2重点侧重分析一点即学生实际操作技能的培养[...]