Example 4: As we all know,animals are our friends. We human beings would feel lonely without them. The earth doesn't only belong to us, but also to the animals and the pla[...]

Example 2: Yes! I think human beings are so arrogant that they look down on creatures except themselves. If God didn't grant man the high IQ and the creativity, the condit[...]

Example 3: Weather can affect many things. Besides the growth of corn and the quality of air, it can also affect human emotions. Different weather conditions may provide diffe[...]

Brief Comment:三个回答描述生动，且都提到了各自对环境问题的看法，使问题立意得以升华。Example 1详细叙述了家乡的河水污染情况及其治理，建议大家要像爱护自己的眼睛一样呵护周围环境；Example 2对家乡的沙尘暴天气十分忧虑并号召环境保护应从自我做起；Example 3通过选取若干例子为人们敲响了警钟，环境污染已经威胁到人们的健康[...]

Example 3: Among all the seasons,I love summer best, for I view it a zealous（热情的）season. That is, I feel optimistic most in this season. Stars are shining in the sky, and worm[...]

Example 4: I believe environmental protection is as important as economic development, and the balance between them can also be achieved if we can recognize the importance of [...]

Brief Comment：能源问题是当今的热点话题，两位答题者从不同角度阐释了各自对题目的理解。Example 1首先以双重否定的形式(not unlimited)强调能源储备并非取之不尽用之不竭的，那么如何缓解现今的能源危机就显得迫在眉睫，紧接着答题人提出几种因地制宜利用能源的方式；Example 2追溯了人类历史长河中，人们凭借智慧获取能源的[...]

Brief Comment（简评）：各位答题者不约而同都对本题做出了不同程度的肯定答复，思路清楚，逻辑性强，体现几位答题者对“写作式口语”法很好的掌握。Example 1开门见山，坚信只要人们做好充分的预防工作,定能将自然灾害带来的损失降至最小程度，处处体现着答题者的乐观主义精神；Example 2指出从古至今，人类在同各种灾害作斗争的过程中已显示[...]

Brief Comment：三个回答的组织都很清晰，各有侧重。Example 1回忆了汶川地震及1998年洪涝灾害，并提出保护环境的个人建议；陈述上自如运用了排比句Example 2着重描述了地震发生时的影响和特征及其他自然灾害的破坏力；表达上有效地使用了列举法；Example 3点出了解自然灾害发生时如何采取有效防护措施的重要性，并列举出一两个自[...]

Brief Comment: Example 1富有想象力，提出学习动物语言的看法，很可爱；Example 2则从动物进化的角度，从反面举例阐述自己反对圈养动物的做法，指出圈养会使动物丧失生存能力，并以达尔文的进化论为自己的观点找出理论依据，最后提出以野生保护区实现动物与人类和谐共处的想法，整体行文流畅，用语准确。新形态2021